the intro/buildup is nice, but i feel like the drop doesn't sufficiently carry the energy into a climax. idk, maybe try some bass design? i feel like throwing in some quick chops would have worked better than what you did here
additionally, the drums are kind of weak, probably because there isn't any sidechaining to them, though some saturation and compression would help as well
but, it's not all bad! i like the energy in the beginning, you just need to carry it over properly. the chord progression and melodies suit the energy well
overall, not bad!